Some comments about composition - in the left side of the picture, I think it would have better displayed her shape/form had she placed her right foot on the crosspiece of the log bench, rather than on the bench itself, as that seems too high for her. On the right side of the picture, it seems to me she should have her right foot on the ground, and (forgive me for this!) no smile.
I have enjoyed these pictures, with the outdoor setting and the weaponry, set off by a lovely model. Please thank her for her hard work in making your concept become a reality.
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